God’s Notebook #01b — Sexual Non-Liberation

July 2nd, 2011

 

Got to love Japan’s backwards sexual culture.

Impressions:

The short version is "No, it did not get any better." Refer back to the previous post for part 1, but since the episode had the temerity to be twice as long, I may as well heap some more on it. Consider everything I said there about the boring characters to stil hold just as true now as it did before. This episode was a little more focused, but it still wasn’t a mystery by any Western standards.

The primary issues though relate to yet more problems with the main protagonist, Narumi. He is a complete non-entity, made to represent the audience just enough to act as their voice "Look at all this crazy stuff. We, the writers, realize that it’s crazy. See? We’re so unique and creative." There are many problems with this, but foremost is that he never stops complaining about being in the show. "Why is this happening to me?" "Why do I have to do this?" "Why me?" "Why am I involved?" "Don’t just say things without my permission."

The second major problem is that the presentation is nonstop narration. I make this complaint a lot, but this episode was especially bad with it. Show, don’t tell. Basic tenant of all media. It even gets so bad at points that characters are informing Narumi how he feels. Don’t tell me he looks depressed while the camera is locked onto the back of his head. Show me that he looks depressed. This is not a book any more, nor is it an audio CD. Make use of your medium, damn it. That’s why animation is fun. The creators have complete and exact control over camera angles, lighting, visual style, everything, but what’s the point if you don’t use any of it?

Preview:

Legs.

Posted in Anime | 11 Comments »

11 Shouts From the Peanut Gallery

  • GF202020 says:

    …what the hell is Ragna the Bloodedge doing here?

  • Karry says:

    “I make this complaint a lot”

    You dont fucking say…never saw you do anything else except complain, big surprise there.

    • TOP2NE1 says:

      Better than people who blow their load over every show they see, angrily clamoring that the crap they love is anything but!

  • Travis says:

    Maybe they don’t have complete creative control – maybe the studio was so desperate to save a few thousand yen that it just let the sub-contracted animation department make everything in advance, whip it back, and then figure out a plot afterwords; and all the writers were too busy getting wasted to make some semblance of plot out of it all.

    Anyway, I see quite a lot TO complain about here. For one – is this being stirred by a DS stylus?
    http://tenka.seiha.org/images2/note1b/note1b_44.jpg

  • Wilfriback says:

    Oh, hey guys, I think there is a corpse over there.

  • Aex says:

    I think they were going for another Kyon-clone with Narumi, and failed miserably. Way too many shows try to do that after Haruhi’s success. Doesn’t work unless the spunky, overpowering, demanding girl is around all the time. Otherwise things just drag like no ones business.

  • The Phantom says:

    I want to slap that brat girl badly, is a ok show, but I will follow it just for the chance of someone slapping her.

  • jingoi says:

    Modern day Gosick!!

  • Celestial_bing says:

    Colorado Bulldog